Who Am I ? akiss2desire is a Bible Belt Blogging Bi Big Beautiful Babe who has been sharing her writing, mostly 1st person lesbian erotica, short stories, poetry, and lesbian pop culture realizations from both the experience and fantasy perspectives to an ever growing audience. I recently passed a million page views ! Thanks for the nominations for the Lezzie awards honoring best lesbian erotica on the web.

Those who have come here regularly know that I have taken a bit of a hiatus from posting and publishing, but my past work is still here and if you are new here there is much to be consumed. I am working on several stories right now and writing from the same mix of experience and fantasy that readers have told me they loved.

Those stories will be the foundation of my upcoming compilation book. Today, you get to read for free. Welcome, and I hope you stay awhile.

Friday

You liked me ..you really liked me.

Hey to my akiss2desire sisterhood.

My story, The Lesbian Seduction of my Office Co-Worker (linked above)  came up at random as I was browsing Literotica.com last night about 2am.   It was originally posted in two parts here back in June of 2009.  

It was the first time one of my own stories came up at random on a site that I peruse fairly often and inspires me in moments of masturbation.  I hadn't read the story in a very long time, but took a deep breath and decided to delve into it.  Sure enough I agonized over it. I went through it criticizing myself for grammatical errors, a glaring mistake in explaining something that was obvious to me as the writer but would have been confusing to the reader, though it was the way it really happened I just didn't explain it, nor realize the mistake in numerous readings and a couple of re-writes. As always when I write, there were more than a couple of terribly long run on sentences.

BUT, on the very positive and uplifting side,  I also read something the way I used to write.  And yes, I thought it was damn good, and others told me so as well in posts I have pasted below.

In this story there is a mixture of fantasy and true experience, as many of my writings are.  This one stands out because some of the the dialogue between "Marcia" and I is written word for word as it occurred.  Some of the inner dialogue I have with myself is word for word as well, and my innermost thought at the time are accurately displayed.   If I go back and re-write this (again) it will have more of my very intimate and emotional struggle that saw my desperation to make love to her pitted against the very real possibility that a misinterpretation of our friendship, or a future falling out between us whether we made love or not, could spell the very end of my job and would cause a lot of explanation to people I wouldn't be able to tell a shred of the truth to.

A blog reader / fan wrote me an email a few months ago with several questions for me.  I love these emails and welcome them..and always answer them truthfully.  She asked me if this story was true, and without reading this back, remembered I had taken liberties and told her it wasn't totally true.  Last night I read it and was amazed how much I was just telling the story as it happened.  

Finally, as I have not been writing as much lately, and feeling like I may never be good enough to win awards or be offered real publishing, looked over these comments posted below.  They are inspiring.  It makes me feel good and perhaps I do have more to write.

Love

Brenda

Comments from readers of literotica

just one of the best ever written

you have taken lesbian love to a new level, what a compelling and unbelieveably hot story!
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by Anonymous07/09/09

Wonderfull

I loved reading this story. It is one of the best I seen in a while. You should consider writing more of this story.
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by Anonymous07/09/09

lovely...

That was just lovely. Please, let us read more about these two ladies.
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by Anonymous07/09/09

Bravo.... with an observation....

The last paragraph of this tale.... My Ex-Lady was a squirter. I can willing attest that there are ladies in the world that can in fact almost drown you if they're in the cowgirl position while receiving oral..... It's one of the thing I miss most about her.
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by ReallyIwould11/21/09

Love it

You are my new favorite writer! You have such a way with words!! Love it
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by Anonymous05/05/14

True seduction of co-worker in the best form!

Clearly, one of the best seduction stories I have read. I was over the edge, multiple times, imagining what it looked like while reading their story!! Awesome, lovely and extremely sexy!! Tell more!!

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