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Thursday, March 12, 2009

these feelings you flourish in our first kiss -lesbian poem


These Feelings You Flourish-Our First Kiss lesbian poetry by akiss2desire 2009 all rights reserved
tender touch
finger to lips
cheek to cheek
your thoughts to mine
I feel your sigh and know your emotion and desire for release
eye contact in the low light
such a soft warmth to the way you look at me

If I like you as a person
this lust we fill will be more
but this can't be left out
the love of your sex will be the first thing to know
the push of your tongue inside my mouth tells me
we do this together tonight
we may do it forever

its a soft wet tongue inside me giving me feelings like ive never felt
softest kiss imaginable and this moment frozen in time.
Kiss me and then lay me back
let me feel our mutual affection more powerful than any man ever approached
look into my eyes knowingly
let me know you will lead us in love

We knew what we wanted
and where it would end
but where to start
the sweet magical tickle of her tongue
against my lips
my skin
and lower
so beautiful she is before me
i wish for my pleasure to be hers
and create her desire as she creates mine
the foundation of what was to come

I felt her tongue and felt the warm rain flooding me in an instant.
Her nipples stiffened against my skin
she reached for my breasts to realize we shared that
and with her other hand, her fingers danced in the tangles of my hair.
Tingles shuddered through me
my soul wanted to merge with hers.
know these feelings you flourish

1 comments:

Nadege said...

I felt her tongue and the warm rain
flooding me in an instant. So many
sensual phrases in your poem.
A fluid flow.

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