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Saturday, September 13, 2008

The Tidal Wave Of Her New Lesbian Self


The Tidal Wave Of Her New Lesbian Self
by brenda
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just staring at her picture.. ..staring and studying her the lines of her form and curves and remembering how soft she was to touch her passionate kiss…in the sprinkling rain until damp became drenched with no care

her eyes requesting my soul as she undulates beneath me
Revealing ...unleashing...undeniably ...the tidal wave of her new lesbian self
quenching mine so long pent up thirst

her arms in warming embrace as she writhes above me

watching her nails digging into the mattress ...the inner joy of causing her effect

the look of disbelief in her eyes as she saw the look of disbelief in mine the moment we both realized how deep in so many ways

how I puzzle at her notes to me

craving her abundant affection and trust

pondering the wide range of emotion felt between the touch of her hand on my knee in friendship, and
the passionate touch of her fingers all over
....and inside me

and inside our very essance we are joined ..this moment..immortal

1 comments:

Nadege said...

sweet and longing ...

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